Can anyone tolerate a Semper Trigee?

Question

Boot Camp

By Semper Fi Reborn

You got a heartbeat.................To get out of the rack

That pumps blood...................So you'll shave better

So you'll live...........................For another inspection

Yet another day......................You'll get through

Answer 1

Each column works ( almost) perfectly, but when joining them, a distraction of meaning takes place. The topic was a good select. The description was heartily descriptive. U took me there for a moment. Thanx.  

Answer 2

OOH AAH!

(How does one spell the Marine grunt call??)

I salute you, sir!

ma

Answer 3

It's Semperb ;)  Wonderful Trigee, Semper...great work.

Answer 4

Are you re upping? lol  A fun read with a bit of the drill Sergeant thrown in for tone.  

Answer 5

Wow, reminds me of my military days....it's a really good trigee...it works all three ways!!  Excellent work Semper!!  Almost made me stand up at ATTENTION!!!

Peace & Love  :)

Answer 6

I pledge allegiance to the spirit of the veteran soldiers of America, to uphold what they fought for, to follow their example, to preach what they practice, and practice what they preach.

Thank you Semper, for your sacrifices and your beliefs, and your reminder that we are still one nation, under God, no matter what happens.  

Answer 7

Nice!  Thanks for sharing!  ((((((Semper))))))

Answer 8

Wonderful!  I really like it.

Edit: Don't you dare re-up! Who would keep us in line on Y/A. (-: