Can some one with experience rate/fix this deck???

Question

1. Water Dragon

2. Guardian Angel Joan

3. Ruin, Queen of Oblivion

4. Mobius the Frost Monarch

5. White-Horned Dragon

6. Slate Warrior

7. Steamroid

8. Dark Valkyria

9. Oxygeddon

10. Hydrogeddon

11. Hydrogeddon

12. Drillroid

13. Mother Grizzly

14. Mother Grizzly

15. Mother Grizzly

16. Sonic Bird

17. Dekoichi The Battlechanted Locomotive

18. Sangan

19. Marshmallon

20. Morphing Jar

21. Spear Cretin

22. Treeborn Frog

1. End Of The World

2. Snatch Steal

3. Samsara

4. Mystical Space Typhoon

5. Book Of Moon

6. Unleash Your Power!

7. Hammer Shot

8. Hammer Shot

9. Brain Control

10. Bonding-H2o

11. Lighting Vortex

12. Double Summon

13. Nightmare’s Steelcage

14. Swords Of Revealing Light

15. Heavy Storm

1. Metalmorph

2. Solemn Wishes

3. Royal Decree

4. Magic Drain

5. Trap Jammer

6. Torrential Tribute

7. Spellbinding Circle

8. Dust Tornado

do not have sacred pheonix and please remember the restricted and limited list

Answer 1

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Answer 2

first, you have too many traps to run royal decree. unleash your power is useless here, samsara has only one use, why keep it? need more help? message me! i gotta go!

Answer 3

Well to start off, you have way too many cards there buddy. Try to keep it at 40! If not 40-45 is almost there.

Hey, i can only help you out with the trap and magic but here's what i got:

-Snatch Steal- banned

-Solemn Wishes, not going to help you if you keep getting attacked try to have more aggressive trap cards like sakuretsu armor or mirror force.

+2-3 Solemn Judgement, that replaces your dust tornado, trap jammer and magic drain and is better because it works in 3 situations, not limited to one.

-Spell Binding Circle, again sakuretsu armor and mirror force is better because the monster dies, the monster that has spellbinding on it can be sacrificed next turn.

-/+ metalmorph takes up room, keep if you feel you HAVE to.

+salvage you get your monsters back.

-nightmare's steelcage, dont stall so much, you already have your swords of revealing light.

+creature swap

+monster reborn

- 2 hammershot, smashing ground is better in the fact that it only affects your opponents monsters.

+1-2 smashing grounds

im not too sure how you want your deck to be like, you ahve to be more specific! Maybe i can help out betterif you tell me what you are trying to do with your deck. From my point of view it seems that you are only trying to get these monsters out as beatsticks(1. Water Dragon

2.Guardian Angel Joan

3.Ruin, Queen of Oblivion

4.Mobius the Frost Monarch)

but if anything let me know I can help a lot better.