Can somebody help me with english paper?

Question

Can you please proof read my english paper? Its for the insurance claim for my car accident. can you look and tell me what information i might need and all the grammatical errors. Please I would highly appreciate it.

08/29/08

My name,

Address,

City

All State Insurance,

Eleventh Street,

Grand Rapids, MI

Dear Sir,

Last week me and my brother had a terrible car accident in our 2005 Ford Escort. We were guiding our aunt while driving and my aunt took a wrong turn and crashed it into the wall. Fortunately we all had our seat belts on and no body got hurt. But the car had the front completely damaged head lights were broken, the bumper fell off and the hood was completely bent. It was not in a condition to drive if driven it would have had caused further damages as suggested by the mechanic. So, we called the mechanic and he toed the car to his garage. The mechanic told us the damage is for $2,000 plus the toeing charges of $150. I am attaching a copy of a bill for your better understanding of the payment.

I request the company to cover my bill of $2,150. I hope to get my demand fulfilled within two weeks of time.

Sincerely,

My name

Answer 1

Your name,

Address,

City (put on left corner)

All State Insurance,

Eleventh Street,

Grand Rapids, MI (put on left corner)

(Put date here)

Dear Sir/Madam,

(Tab here)Last week my brother and I had a terrible car accident in our 2005 Ford Escort. We were guiding our aunt, while she was driving and my aunt took a wrong turn and crashed it into the wall. Fortunately we all had our seat belts on and no body got hurt.

(Tab here) However, the car's front was completely damaged, the head lights were broken, the bumper fell off and the hood was completely bent. It was not in a condition to drive and, if driven, it would have had caused further damages, as suggested by the mechanic.

(Tab here)So, we called the mechanic and he towed the car to his garage. The mechanic told us the cost of repair is $2,000 and that the towing charge is $150.

(Tab here) I have attached a copy of the bill for your reference.

I would like you to cover my bill of $2,150.

(Tab here) I hope to get my demand fulfilled within two weeks and appreciate your co-operation, as I am very distressed and shocked at this period in time.

Yours Faithfully,

(Your name)

Answer 2

I wrote out all the mistakes from this letter but I have erased them because it is clear that this is not your English paper, but a grammatical exercise which you did not write.

You lied.