Can somebody please read my poem?

Question

Ok so i know i've posted this before, but everyone who agrees to read it (no offence) but don't really know what they're talking about or how to improve it.

I need someone who can help me with it..and also who i can contact via email or msn

Answer 1

Ok I write a little myself send me your poem and I will take a look and advise where / if I can.  No promises though.

Answer 2

mail me the poem and i'll see if i can help.  though if i think its fine i'll just say so.

Answer 3

you can send me your poem my email is  and i can get my professor to reed it in literature

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