Can somebody please rewrite this with punctuation

Question

The girl seen the guy walk past her once again she was so nervous but she said wait to him and walked up to him with a brave smile on her face she told him she didnt know how to tell him how she felt so he said may i tell you how i feel i think your the most beautiful girl i have ever seen and i think i really like you i know we dont know each other but i cant help the way i feel the girl smiled and hugged him by that hug he knew she felt the same way about him after 2 years of dating since they both decided to get married

Answer 1

The girl saw the guy walk past her once again,she was so nervous, but she said "wait." to him, and walked up to him with a brave smile on her face. she told him, she didn't know how to tell him how she felt, so he said, "may i tell you how i feel i think your the most beautiful girl i have ever seen, and i think i really like you i know we don't know each other, but i cant help the way i feel." the girl smiled and hugged him, by that hug he knew she felt the same way about him after 2 years of dating. since, they both decided to get married.

there you go don't hate me if there is a few mistakes but there shouldn't be!

Answer 2

If you get everyone else to do your homework you won't actually be learning anything and then really there is no point in going to school.

If you don't know grammar or punctuation then you're going to find life really difficult.

Answer 3

The girl {add the girls name} saw the guy {name} walk right past her once more. She felt nervous but could not let him walk away so she said,"Wait!!!". She walked up to him courageously and yet weak at the knees but maintained a smile on her face when she told him,"I don't know how to tell you how I feel." The guy responded, "Well let me tell you how I feel, I think you are the most beautiful girl I have ever seen and I think I really like you. I know we know little of each other, but I can't help this inside that I feel for you!" The girl smiled and hugged him and once she did, she felt inside that she was going to be with him forever because she felt the same way too. Two years of dating passed by and the two were happily married.:D

ummm ok. dont know if this helped. haha.

but suggestion: if you are going to have the two characters speaking use quotation marks.

And also use names for THE GUY and THE GIRL so this story seems more realistic and has more meaning to it. haha. :D

Answer 4

The girl saw the guy walk past her once again. She was nervous, but she said, "Wait!" and walked up to him with a brave smile on her face. She told him she didn't know how to tell him how she felt, so he said, "May I tell you how I feel? I think you're the most beautiful girl I have ever seen and I think I really like you. I know we don't know each other, but I can't help the way I feel." The girl smiled and hugged him. By that hug he knew she felt the same way about him. After 2 years of dating, they both decided to get married.

Answer 5

There are grammar issues too.

The girl saw the guy walk past her once again. She was nervous, but she said, "Wait!" and walked up to him with a brave smile on her face. She told him she didn't know how to tell him how she felt, so he said, "May I tell you how I feel? I think you're the most beautiful girl I have ever seen and I think I really like you. I know we don't know each other, but I can't help the way I feel." The girl smiled and hugged him. By that hug he knew she felt the same way about him. After 2 years of dating, they both decided to get married.

Answer 6

The girl saw the guy walk past her once again. Even though she was nervous, she said, "Wait," and with a brave smile on her face, she walked up to him. She told him that she didn't know how to tell him how she felt.

He said, "May I tell you how I feel? I think that you are the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen and I think I really like you. I know that we don't know each other, but I can't help the way I feel."

The girl smiled and hugged him. When she did that, the guy knew that she felt the same way about him. After 2 years of dating, they decided to get married.

Answer 7

ok everyone right who's answered so far, but instead of the number "2" write out "two"

otherwise everyone else was correct.