Can someone check my grammer and sentence,please also can i apply for account manager with this experience? ty

Question

2007-Present FDI Collateral Managment Sacramento, CA

Title Follow-up Agent

 Follow-up on accounts to ensure proper vehicle titling documentation is received

 Provided customer support via phone,email or fax

 Update clients records via internal web based software document all action taken

 . Lien Placement Agent

 Filed approoriate state application to record new lien.

 Verify for collateral packet to be complete before securing a new lien

 Ensure that contractual obligation are met for each client.

 Took appropriate action to correct any document that are missing or incomplete

2006-2007 SierraWes Drywall Loomis, CA

Accountant

 AR /AP invoices,Data entry,collection and account reconciliation

 Contacted sub contractors for upcoming jobs/prepare weekly aging report

 Received incoming invoices and application of payment/enter payroll

2004-2006 Insurance Wholesalers Citrus Heights,CA

Customer Service Representative

▪ Audit new business application for Life Insurance/Mortgage protection daily

▪ Assist agents with various correspondence and underwriting guides per company

▪ Entering and setting the suspence of all endorsement into management system

▪ Completing production report weekly/Compliling data for month report sales

Answer 1

just as the above has stated those error's are the only real ones i saw. Now for experience you will have enough. As long as a person has the appropriate licences to deal with the accounts that the position will be overviewing you should be good. Remember there biggest thing they wanna see is your personality. If you are kind and prompt that will give you a edge. Your job will be to remind the clients why your agency is better then down the road by using your customer service experience. When you get experience in the account manager position maybe you could look at doing my type of job. I am a personal lines Account Executive once you know your job it is alot more fun to deal with new clients everyday and i find it alot more rewarding. Good luck you seem to have the credentials now go woah them with personality to. You will do great.

Answer 2

first place you put down the word appropriate is spelled wrong. The second place is correct.

Last sentence: compiling is the correct spelling.

next to last sentence: I think the word suspence should be suspense.

lien placement agent: remove the . before the word lien.

Answer 3

On your current job description, maintain the correct tense. E.G. Provide (instead of provided), file (instead of filed) take instead of took-remember you are still doing this job currently.

Appropriate is spelled wrong

Ensure that contractual obligation(s) are met (obligation should be pleural)

On your past positions make sure you use past tense-audited (instead of audit) assisted (instead of assist).

You have a duty listed-doesn't quite make sense:

Assist(ed) agents with various correspondence and underwriting guides per company ________

Do you mean to say :

Assist(ed) agents with various correspondence and underwriting per company guidelines?

Compiling data for month (end) sales report

endorsement should be pleural