Can someone edit this essay for me? Its on the book The Hobbit.?

Question

ok well the task for the essay is as follows

Describe the ways in which the main character(s) of each novel come(s) close to becoming or acting like someone they hate, but then at the end, they do the right thing and act the right way.

It has to be 3 paragraphs and it says do not summarize plots.I basically need you to check if i answered the task and if all my paragraphs are make correctly and that all my grammer and punctuation is right ect.

Whatever if wrong just copy my essay and paste it here with all the corrections. Thank you i highly appreciate it.

Answer 1

ill give it a shot about punction mostly and ill try and help [i may not be 100% right, tho]:

Throughout the novel, Bilbo Baggins remains very loyal to his friends; the dwarves. The dwarves, however, don’t feel the same way about Bilbo. They argued with Gandalf about leaving Bilbo when he [state the name not he, since both characters are male]disappears as they escape the orcs. Of course, they didn’t know he's been stuck in the cave with Gollum and was lucky enough to get out. The dwarves want to abandon Bilbo to save their own skins, without a second thought[u don't need without a second thought unless it pertains to the story A LOT]. Bilbo, on the other hand, has to ask himself a few times whether to save the dwarves or himself [id say himself or the dwarves].

He does this multiple times when they are captured by the spiders and when they are captured by the elves [when they are captured by the spiders and elves]. They are not loyal to him; but he remains loyal. Then, at the end of the novel, Bilbo does something that could be seen as an extreme act of disloyalty; he delivers the Arkenstone into the hands of the men and elves to give them a strong bargaining position with Thorin. Bilbo returns to the dwarves after he does this, but he did commit an act that Thorin considers highly disloyal to the dwarves and himself. If you examine Bilbo's motives for doing this though, you know that he did it to save the dwarves from their own greed.

Bilbo still tries to save the dwarves, even though Thorin doesn't [shouldn't use contractions, does not] realize it until he's dying. His [he] explains this in his last line to Bilbo: “There is more in you of good than you know, child of the kindly West. Some courage and some wisdom blended in measure. If more of us valued food and cheer and song above hoarded gold, it would be a merrier world.”