Can someone give me a god opinion on this?

Question

This is a poem I made.

Bazing cheat fills the sky and the rays from the sun strike this cursed earth the days of man have come to an end and this is what caused this disastrous trend. The causing is war the heat of the battle the killing of a brother we all are one to another a family as a whole the race which we know we are human can we see all we jsut need is peace. Trust is waht we need in this lust for power trust to put down the weapon without knowing if at our point of weakness a shot will be fired. To end a life to make the mind blank to the days when all hearts sank as our race came to an end and toward the blazing sky al I see is the red sun burning down upon the earth so high. The heat is imense my wounds from the battle has healed leaving the mark and the blazing sun keeps my skin peeled. And as I search for the life that I once thought dead a voice of thought came to me and said this isnt the end just the start of the trend before fire pierce the sky the sea levels rise and the cursed world I know and will truely see is comming up close and will soon be in front of me.

I just made it out of nowhere I call it the Cursed Earth if you like this check the other poems I wrote. As I close out with im 14 young not some old dude who got nothing better to do.

Answer 1

use line breaks. Otherwise, this isn't so  much a poem as it is a long, drawn out version of prose.

Poetry utilizes line breaks in order to contribute to a meter and lyrical presence.  

Answer 2

Only God could give such a thing.