Can someone give me a title for this and your opinion

Question

I’ll sleep when I’m dead

There’s no time to waste

When nothing’s left to be said

And our demons are faced

We cast our fears away to the wind

And beg forgiveness for we know we have sinned

In our time of woe and despair

We look to the skies for a gleam of light

In our hearts we feel a lonely stare

That casts our souls into night

For when love is gone or seems lost

We feel we have paid the ultimate cost

And in my life I’ve felt this hurt

And though it brings you down

I’m more cautious and alert

For although this pain is renown

In time you come to heal

From the pain you now feel

In our darkest hour

In the blackest bight

We somehow find our strength and power

To win our demonic fight

We set ourselves free

From the evils blessed be

So I live my life

From demon to demon

Through all the strife

To be a freeman

And look for good in a world gone bad

And try to hold on to what I once had.

Answer 1

In my opinion the title should be "That's Life"or "The Reality"....

My comments..The poem is very good. Its bring a big message to all the people in the world. Keep on. GBU.

Answer 2

"Mirror" would be a good title for this.  

Answer 3

i would call the poem demons. i thought it was a wonderful poem with a lot of emotion. you are a great poet. keep it up.

Answer 4

I don't know what to call it, but I thought it was pretty and sad. You are a really good  poet.

Answer 5

I'll sleep when I'm done.

Sounds like a good title.  I only say this because most poems are titled by the first  line.  Plus you talk about a lot of things that are to happen mainly after you are doing living far as the afterlife.  So I pretty much think that sums it up nicely.  Up to you though.  P.S. or if you really want to be creative just leave it Untitled.  I know a lot of poets who have just plainly left their peoms called Untitled because either they just couldn't match a good title or just liked it untitled.

Answer 6

Only two negative comments:

I don't believe the line that ends in "renown" fits the rhythym

and "free man" rather than "freeman"

other than that it's great, it makes me think of a witch coven in mourning for one of their own after  the witch trial ends....

I think in part this is a spell or curse.