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Can someone give me ideas for my shirt story?

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I feel like writing a story about a woman who is wearing a tucked-in T-shirt and tightly belted jeans but she decides to take off the T-shirt and there is another one underneath and it is tucked in also. She keeps taking off layers of shirts, all of them tucked in until she takes them off. Finally, she comes to the last layer and it is somehow stuck and she cannot take it off for a long time, if at all.

I'm looking for interesting ideas as to details. Anything you can tell me will serve as influence.

#1: How many layers of T-shirts does she have on?

#2: How long does it take for the last layer to come off and/or does it stay stuck indefinitely?

#3: Where is she when this is happening?

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  1. shirt story???

    um this is very different.....

    how did you even come up with something this odd?

    russian dolls may "influence" you, go buy one..


  2. 5

    it stays on

    trying to try on more shirts!

  3. Okay, so I'm thinking that it could be like this- The lady is one day getting ready for work (school etc). And when she undresses, there's a shirt underneath the shirt. She keeps taking off layers of shirts, until she gives up (she removes about 10-15 layers). She goes through life, taking one shirt off every day to change her outfit. Then one day, when pulling up the edge of her shirt over her head, she sees her bare skin. She is amazed at what she sees. She keeps her shirt around her neck, and pats and pinches her stomach, surprised. She realizes that she can wear her own clothes now, so she immediately takes off her shirt. But, once the shirt came off her head, she drops dead. I guess, the many layers of shirts can symbolize her life span, and when she pulled of that last shirt, her life ended.

    credit please if successful :)

  4. She has three layers; each harder to pull off then the last.  The Body, soul, and then spirit.  Three layers.

    It takes just a minute or so to remove the top layer, the body layer, because it is the most shallow of the layers.  

    Then, it's rather difficult to remove layer 2, the Soul layer.  Her understanding of the world changes, and so does the attitude.

    Once she struggles to remove the second layer, she arrives at the last.  The Spirit.  No matter what she does, she cannot remove it.

    She realizes no matter what she does, it'll always be  a part of her.  In desperation, she kills herself, and awakes in heaven (or h**l), and sees the shirt is still on.

    One can not part with the true nature of their spirit within.

    If it get's published, be sure to credit me!  :p

  5. This is beyond strange. Hasn't this been done before with Russian dolls?

  6. YOU'RE CRAZY!!!! GET A CHECK UP AT THE HOSPITAL!

  7. 1 The woman would have six shirts all different colors and styles.

    #2 The last layer to come off would take four hours

    #3 She is at a water park and she wants to get wet but wants to take off her shirt(s)


  8. 1 She has twenty T-shirts on

    #2 It takes her ten minutes to get the last shirt off

    #3 She is at her local high school changing for their play and she is the main character and she came late so she had to change quickly!!! =)

  9. 6 layers will do it. The shirt stays on.She's a stripper in a festy smoke filled pub surrounded by realy old pathetic looking, down and out men who have that twisted desperate look on their faces that gets more desperate with each layer.  

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