i've been working on this for a while now, i keep posting it and then updating it. wanna tell me what you think/any suggestions/constructive criticism?
Your song
Is elusive,
The barest sliver of a smile,
Subtle like the freckles
Sprinkled lightly across your skin.
But still strong,
Like the granite muscles of your marble arms.
It has something of a thunderstorm
Flashing in and out of the horizon,
The electric static that surrounds us,
Forceful but distant,
Untouchable yet real.
It is warm
Like the heat that flashes between our skins
As we sit, barely touching,
Almost silent,
In our companionship
That somehow always blends into the crowd,
Yet for me is perpetually ecstatic.
Your song
Is one that has somehow
Not yet been written,
And may never be,
Just like our story.
Nevertheless, it continues
To echo in my head
Long after you are gone.
And, as elusive as it remains
There is nothing I can do to drive it away.
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