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Can someone help me with a dark gothic verse?

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Hi.. I was wondering if someone could help me with a dark gothic verse, that would fit nicely after this-

"as i wander through the nameless abyss of my soul i grasp the skelteal hand of poetic greeting to draw me through the blood red mists to emerge at the precipice, breathless, waiting. lead me on, o dead mistress of forgotten verse. i am waiting at the brink"

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  1. Do I fall into the dark waters, Let the currents take me under

    Kiss the breath of the mistress who leads me-Feeds me the words

    The words I yearn to find-The ones that escape the confides of my mind

    See me; free me from my binding-this corseted sarcophagus-exhale for the first time

    ***I have a poem up, if you could comment i would appreciate it


  2. slightly creepy. 8 /

  3. Sometimes I feel like a lion in a cage

    Faust wears my haircut

    Mephistopheles’ kills the sky

    looking smashing

    looking deranged

    horned rimmed head

    cloven,hoof

    something’s wrong

    My women crawled off

    With Lucifers fool

    to take a hit with a spoon

    take a look

    at your ashen lady

    darkness breaths remedy

    new lives in calamity

    Gargoyles, dripping blood & stone

    merry wives of Windsor

    have found their home

    Faust changes

    into a dark bear

    later a little man

    with a bald head

    Exekiel, deutronomy

    Abadddon, Appollyon, Beelzebub

    Everywhere I look his see

    his dark highness

    sitting on his thrown

    stealing salicious looks

    cigarette burning

    whisky face

    my mind is fading

    into twilight

    Something’s wrong

    Quickly sailing

    Into Hades

    Persephone is waiting

    Pluto is away in Haiti

    Dancing with some

    Voodoo chief

    ranting, & raving

    while Lucifer

    dancers, sparkling

    smiling ,shining

    knives & forks are grinding

  4. let the darkness beyond hold your heart

    for me to find in the nameless wavering shadows

    of desires and names.

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