Can someone help me with my toon deck?

Question

monsters

toon mermaid x2

toon dark magician girl x2

toon summoned skull x3

blue eyes toon dragon x3

toon gemini elf x3

toon masked sorcerer x3

toon goblin attack force x2

marshmallon

spirit reaper

spells

toon world x3

toon table of contents x3

giant trunade

scapegoat

swords of revealing light

mausoleum of the emporer x2

traps

ordeal of a traveler x2

royal decree x2

draining shield x3

toon defense x2

Answer 1

this is an alright deck, but i would suggest adding a toon cannon solder, it helps with dealing damage and as the other guy said a lot of spell and trap provention would also help, another thing if you have a solemn wishes, use it!!!, it will help with mausoluem of the emperor, and if, for a slight chance you have one, a thousand eyes restrict will also help stall for you

Answer 2

If a Toon Deck is your thing go for it but I think that there are just too many cards that can smash a toon world deck and you would need a lot of cards like Mystical Space Typhoon, Magic Jammer, Trap Jammer, Dark Bribe, Solemn Judgement and Twister. I would also suggest some cards like Sakuretsu Armour, Mirror Force and Enemy Controller.

I particulary like Dragon Decks, Dark Decks and Monarch Decks. I sometimes even run an Elemental Hero Deck if I make it good.

Anyway I hope your deck goes well and I hope that I helped a little.

Cya