Can someone make me a jingle??

Question

Can someone make me a jingle for my piano class?

We have to make a jingle for piano. My group had to think of a toy idea--- we picked The Ultimate Jumprope--which glows in the dark/built in mp3/counts number of jumps... Can some one help us make the jingle

Below is the one we made which is PATHETIC!!:

The ultimate jumprope

yeah the ultimate jumprope

i said the ultimate jumprope

yeah....

it glows in the dark

and even makes an ark

its an awesome toy

even for a boy

make sure when you jump

you dont slump

feel its squishy grip

so your hands wont slip

listen to your favorite bands in the palms of your hands

And thats IT.... It sucks..

Soo.... if you can help change it or make a new one

THAT would be very very very appreciated

Thanks to all who respond

Answer 1

the one that you guys made is AWESOME!!!!!!!! i dont think you need a new one

Answer 2

Yah I dont see anything wrong with it either.  I mean its a jingle right.  Its not suppose to be a platinum selling song or anything.  Its campy and cheezy and thats how Jingles are suppose to be.  I like it.  I would definatly buy the ultimate jump rope for a childs birthday.

Answer 3

lol the jingle u made is awesome!! its so funny and cool!

stick with it!

Also, people will get a good laugh out of it to. dont worry! its FINE!