Can someone please rate my Monarch Control Deck (prototype only)?

Question

Monsters

Monster Cards

* Mobius the Frost Monarch

* Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

* Raiza the Storm Monarch

* Caius the Shadow Monarch

* Kuraz the Light Monarch x2

* Cyber Dragon x2

* Spell Striker

* Nimble Momonga x3

* D.D. Warrior Lady

* Marshmallon

* Exiled Force x2

* Treeborn Frog

* Samsara Kaiser

* D.D. Assailant x2

Spell Cards

* Monster Reborn

* Heavy Storm

* Mystical Space Typhoon

* Enemy Controller

* Lightning Vortex

* Soul Exchange

* Brain Control

* Smashing Ground

* Stray Lambs

* Book of Moon

* Fiend's Sanctuary

* Fissure

* Premature Burial

Traps

* Dimensional Fissure

* Bottomless Trap Hole

* Magic Jammer

* Magic Cylinder

* Ultimate Offering

* Royal Decree

* Imperial Order

Answer 1

This deck is actually pretty good.  I think that a few cards could be replaced though...   Imperial order is banned, I would swap it out for Solemn Judgement.  Dimensional Fissure gets rid of monsters when destroyed by removing them, but it also removes yours, which gets rid of graveyard advantage on your part.  Stray lambs is a good choice, but in my opinion Shrink would help out your deck a little more by saving your tributes and getting rid of your opponent's monster.  Finally, Sakuretsu Armor can save you alot of tributable monsters.