Can someone please revise my petition letter to get back in school

Question

Here is the letter....Please feel free to add more to it if you think it will help me out...

Hello my name is Tia Brown and the reason why I am here today is because I have failed to meet the 2.0 GPA of summer 2008. I am a hard working single mother, and I am very honest, faithful, dedicated, and I have a genuine devotion to complete my Associate of Arts Degree. The reason why I had failed the Intro to nursing course was because I was having a hard time with this one particular quiz.

I passed all of the other quizzes and lab work that was to be competed to do clinical. I was allowed three times to take the quiz but after the third time I had to drop the course because I failed the one quiz. I called the school the same day I had to leave the class and they told me I was unable to withdraw from the class because there was only a few days left of the class and that I was better of just staying in the class so I wouldn’t have to pay back the Financial Aid I received.

This is my first time every being on academic suspension and I will do anything it takes to complete my degree. I am also willing to take a class on how to be successful in college. I also plan on taking a few extra credits during the fall in effort to bring up my GPA I want to thank you for your time, and I appreciate your prompt consideration of this effort.

Answer 1

Hello,

My name is Tia Brown and the reason I am here today is because I have failed to meet the 2.0 GPA for the summer of 2008. I am a hardworking,single mother. I am very honest,faithful,dedicated, and have a genuine desire to complete the requirements for an Associates of Arts Degree.

I passed all but one quiz and passed the lab work. I had to drop the course after attempting the quiz 3 times. In order to keep my Financial Aid I was told by the school that I was unable to withdraw from the class because there was not enough time left in the class.

I am willing to go to tutoring or classes on how to be more successful in test taking. I will do whatever it takes to complete my degree including taking extra credits in the fall in order to increase my GPA.

Please consider my reinstatement. I am dedicated to becoming a nurse. Thank you for your time

Answer 2

The world needs ditch diggers too!