Can someone please score my SAT essay, i wrote it in 25 min so it might suck, you tell me?

Question

“Knowledge is something that can be gained but never lost.” It is widely debatable as to whether knowledge is beneficial to mankind. While some people think that knowledge can improve the human society, others believe that knowledge is simply a burden. It is clearly evident that knowledge is a great benefit through my readings of the novel The Dead Poet Society, my study of Galileo’s discovery, and my observations of Mendeleev’s organization of the periodic table.

Answer 1

I'm not sure if this helps at all, but if you take a Kaplan SAT prep course, you can submit any essay you do for grading by actual SAT graders. That would probably be your safest bet.

Answer 2

It's hard to grade considering you didn't include the prompt.  You would probably receive between a 10-12 out of 12 for this.  The grammar is good, there's a lot of sentence structure variation, you use a lot of examples, and you seem well read.  I kind of doubt you only used 25 minutes for this but anyway it's very good.

Answer 3

It is hard to score when you forgot to mention what it is surposed to be about .?? Is it a history lesson  or maby a film review and where are your ideas on this.

so much in colledge is nether rigth or wrong just differant wasy s of looking at things..

But dont take my word on this ask around and see ..

Answer 4

im 13 grading an sat...

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