Can someone plz help me with this deck?

Question

Monsters x21

Thestalos the Firestorm monarch

Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

Mobius the frost monarch x2

Caius the Shadow monarch x2

D.D Survivor x3

D.D Scout plane x3

D.D Warrior Lady

D.D Warrior

D.D Assailant x2

Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer x2

Exiled force

Gren Maju Da Eiza

Morphing Jar

Spell x11

Lightning Vortex

Mystical Space Typhoon

Brain Control x2

Dark Core

Dimensional fissure x3

Enemy Controller x2

Reinforcement to the army

Traps x9

Sakuretsu Armor x2

D.D Dynamite

Macro Cosmos x3

Bottomless Trap Hole x2

Torrential tribute

Answer 1

i would separate the monarchs and out of play theme, except caius. 2 gravekeeper spy is good for searching with out activating in the graveyard. dark bribe and solemn judgment are very helpful. you need 2 reinforcement of army. i would use 2 lightening vortex. mirror force to expensive for you?

i seen this deck work with out return or escape , but i think it would be very useful if not necessary.

Answer 2

Brain Control = LIMITED to 1

Monsters: 19

3 Caius the Shadow Monarch

2 Mobius the Frost Monarch

1 Raiza the Storm Monarch

2 Cyber Dragon

3 D.D. Survivor

1 Snipe Hunter

2 Exiled Force

2 D.D. Scout Plane

1 Morphing Jar

2 Spell Striker

Spells: 12

3 Dimensional Fissure

2 Reinforcement of the Army

2 Lightning Vortex

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Brain Control

2 Enemy Controller

Traps: 9

2 Macro Cosmos

3 Bottomless Trap Hole

1 Torrential Tribute

1 Trap Dustshoot

2 Dark Bribe

Total: 40 cards

Answer 3

i would suggest taking out 1 D.D survivor and a mobius and replacing them with Cyber Dragon x2 and a jinzo and try a mirror force

Answer 4

If your trying to create a "Remove from play"-based deck, try this H&T(Hints and Tips)...

Remove Macro Cosmos and replace it with another D.D. Dynamite, a Magic Cylinder and a Magic Jammer...

Replace 2 Brain Controls with a Heavy Storm and a Nobleman of Crossout....

Replace 2 D.D. Scout Planes and D.D. Warrior by 3 Banisher of Lights....

Try this Deck:

Monsters-21

1-Thestalos the Firestorm monarch

1-Zaborg the Thunder Monarch

2-Mobius the frost monarch

2-Caius the Shadow monarch

3-D.D Survivor

1-D.D Scout plane

1-D.D Warrior Lady

3-Banisher of Light

2-D.D Assailant

2-Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer

1-Exiled force

1-Gren Maju Da Eiza

1-Morphing Jar

Spell-11

1-Lightning Vortex

1-Mystical Space Typhoon

1-Heavy Storm

1-Nobleman of Crossout

1-Dark Core

3-Dimensional fissure x3

2-Enemy Controller x2

1-Reinforcement to the army

Traps-9

2-Sakuretsu Armor

2-D.D Dynamite

1-Magic Cylinder

1-Magic Jammer

2-Bottomless Trap Hole

1-Torrential tribute

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