Can someone review my story?

Question

Not all of it, but just a chapter or something. If you are up for it, I'll email it to you. Thanks. I just want to know what you think.

Answer 1

Why don't you post it on a forum for writers? Then you'll get lots of reviews.

http://authorsnotes.info/forum/index.php

Answer 2

YES!  My dad is an author and I would absolutley love to! Email it to my email [e-mail]

Answer 3

Sure! I'd love to! What's it about?

But I must warn you, if you want me to help with ANYTHING grammar related I can't help. I'm terrible with it, lol.

My email is [e-mail]

Answer 4

I'd be very happy to!  I can help with grammar, too, if you need it.  My dad is a professional-class writer, and he can help too, if you want.  

Answer 5

You could post it on http://www.chapteread.com and get feedback. The people there give pretty good feedback.

Answer 6

Sure, why not. You can email me through my profile.