Can someone who is fluent in french correct this short paragraph for me? Don't use a translator please.?

Question

Try not to change too much because I don't want to make it complicated since I'm not fluent in french

Un homme pauvre, Jean-Paul, veut devenir le meilleur homme d’affaire dans sa société. Il vais faire tout accomplir son but. Une actrice célèbre perd sa célébrité et son argent. Regarder elle essaie de survivre

Dans un monde sans sa celebrite. Quel est Jean-Paul vais faire? Comment a Sally survivre sans sa argent? Du samedi au mardi (10 h 00)

Answer 1

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Un homme pauvre, Jean-Paul, veut devenir le meilleur homme d’affaire dans sa société. Il va tout faire pour atteindre son but. Une actrice célèbre perd sa célébrité et son argent. Regardez, elle essaie de survivre dans le monde sans sa célébrité. Comment Jean-Paul va-t'il faire? Comment Sally va-t'elle survivre sans son argent? Du samedi au mardi (10 h 00)

A poor man, JP, wants to be the best business man in his firm. Il will do his best to reach his goal. A famous actress loses both notability and gold. Look, she tries to stay alive in the world without her notability. How will JP do ? How will Sally stay alive without here gold.

Answer 2

A poor man, Jean-Paul, wants to become the best business man on his firm. He 's going to do everything to reach his goal. A famous actress loses her celebrity et her money. Look, she tries to survive in a world without her celebrity. What is Jean-Paul gonna do? How will Sally survive without her money?

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