Can someone with experience rate/fix this deck?

Question

1. Water Dragon

2. Guardian Angel Joan

3. Ruin, Queen of Oblivion

4. Mobius the Frost Monarch

5. White-Horned Dragon

6. Slate Warrior

7. Steamroid

8. Dark Valkyria

9. Oxygeddon

10. Hydrogeddon

11. Hydrogeddon

12. Drillroid

13. Mother Grizzly

14. Mother Grizzly

15. Mother Grizzly

16. Sonic Bird

17. Dekoichi The Battlechanted Locomotive

18. Sangan

19. Marshmallon

20. Morphing Jar

21. Spear Cretin

22. Treeborn Frog

1. End Of The World

2. Heavy Storm

3.Nightmare's Steelcage

4. Mystical Space Typhoon

5. Book Of Moon

6. Swords of Revealing Light

7. Hammer Shot

8. Hammer Shot

9. Brain Control

10. Bonding-H2o

11. Lighting Vortex

12. Double Summon

1. Metalmorph

2. Solemn Wishes

3. Royal Decree

4. Magic Drain

5. Trap Jammer

6. Torrential Tribute

7. Spellbinding Circle

8. Dust Tornado

do not have sacred pheonix or solemn judgement

Answer 1

Well, you basically built a water deck with lots of other random cards. Right now I will say 7/10

So, here is my decklist that will maybe improve these deck.

Monsters:19

2 Levia Dragon Daedalus

3 Warrior of Atlantis

3 Gagagigo

3 Giga Gagagigo

3 Sea Serpent Warrior of Darkness

3 Amphibius Bugroth MK-3

2 Mermaid Knight

Spells: 13

1 Terraforming

3 A Legendary ocean

2 Big Wave Small Wave

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Smashing Ground

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Monster Reborn

1 Umi

1 Premature Burial

Traps: 8

1 Gravity Bind

1 Mirror Force or Radiant

3 Tornado Wall

1 Waboku

2 Sakuretsu Armor

If any questions you can email me at: [e-mail]

Answer 2

This looks mostly like a water deck so i'll try to make it more like that because you have too many themes at the moment

You should drop;

Guardian Angel Joan

Ruin, Queen of OblivionWhite-Horned Dragon

Slate Warrior

Steamroid

Dark Valkyria

Drill roid (this format is very offensive)

sonic bird

spear creten

end of the worl

nightmares steelcage

swords of revealing light (is i minus 1)

hammer shot (both cos ur gonna have the biggest monster out mostof the time)

double summon (rubbish card)

metalmorph

solemn wishes (good under rated card but not for this deck)Royal Decree

Magic Drain

Trap Jammer

Spellbinding Circle

dust tornado (mobius will do the job)

then add if you can...

x3 Abyss soldier

the third hydrogeddon

another oxygeddon

2 more mobius (you got treeborn in there)

get some caius's in there if you can (one or two)

smashing ground

fissure

monster reborn

premature burial

mirror force

x2 or x3 bottomless trap hole (DAD and Judgement Dragon)

and some other good low level water monsters - i cant think of any at the moment

Hope i helped :-)