Can this be taken as a poem?

Question

I have watch you walk on the beaches of my soul

saw our sandcastles washed away by the waves of life

Your boat carried away by our storms

have become a seagull's cry in the wind

I have lost my compass

you my guiding star.

I have watched you walk away on the beaches of my soul

hopelessly trying to anchor you to my heart

but its to late

the sandcastles is wiped away.

Answer 1

Yes. It's lyrical, flowing, with great word choice and imagery.

It's great how you manage to weave similes and metaphors so smoothly into the short but meaningful words.

Keep up the great work! =]

Answer 2

Yep! I really like it =) especially the "hopelessly trying to anchor you to my heart" line =)

Answer 3

Oh yes! and its fabulous....i loved it

Answer 4

anything can be "taken as a poem".. if you use correct verb tenses

Answer 5

wow, very nice!!

I love the imagery