Can u edit this sentence?

Question

Ok, it's for a research paper on how one can escape from their emotional isolation through the exposure to love in Great Expectations...

(some do, some don't)

To begin with, as the embittered prisoner to Havisham’s relentless oppression, Estella is clearly incapable of unearthing the key to freedom, provided that love is omitted from her existence.

I don't like how it sounds...if possible, how could I improve it?

Thanks!

Answer 1

If love is omitted from her existence, Estella is clearly incapable of unearthing the key to freedom from the prison of Havisham's relentless oppression.

Answer 2

Havisham's relentless oppression shows that Estella is incapable of unearthing the key to freedom. The key which provides love which is omitted from her existence.

I dont really understand this sentence but I hope this helps!

Answer 3

Estella was a embittered prisoner, facing Havisham's oppression, if she could experience love, she would be able to unearth key to her freedom.