Can u help me rephrase this poem or put corrections please?

Question

help me in this poem i dunno where to put semi-colon, period or even comas, dashes this poem please...im going to give it to my _____ special one

the pitter-patter of rain the sweet sweet pain i love you like this and it's you im gonna miss dont think i hate you im willing to get hurt for you this might be my first and last but do you know i must Doing this for you even if it makes me blue... -me an 11 year old girl...seriously

Answer 1

You can write a poem multiple ways.  But this is very good. How old are you, having feeling so strong like this?

The pitter-patter of rain.

The sweet, sweet pain.

I love you like this and

it's you im gonna miss.

Don't think that i hate you,

im willing to hurt for you.

This might be my first and my last,

but this I know, I must do for you,

even if it makes me blue...

Take me an 11 year old girl...seriously

Answer 2

The pitter-patter of rain,

The sweet sweet pain.

I love you like this,

And it's you I'm going to miss.

Don't think that I hate you,

This might be my first and last, but do you know I must.

Doing this for you,

Even if it makes me blue... <<< the dot dot dot is optional you could just put a period.