Can u rate/fix my yugioh deck 10/10?

Question

Rate it

Fix it

Comment it

Can it enter a tournament?

MONSTERS

2x hydrogeddon

Oxygeddon

Luster dragon

Gladiator beast andal

Dark blade

Chaos command magician

Sabersaurus

Swift gaia the fierce knight

Zure knight of dark world

Gilford the legend

Jerry beans man

x-Head cannon

Blue eyes white dragon

Medusa worm

Gearfried the iron knight

Skilled dark magician

Luster dragon #2

Warrior of zera

Raging flame sprite

Kabazuls

Mystic swordsman lvl4

Pitch-Black warewolf

Ninja grandmaster sasuke

Total defense shogun

The six samurai- zanji

SPELLS

The warrior returning alive

Riryoku

Megamorph

Mystic wok

Red medicine

Dian keto the cure master

Poison of the old man

2xHeavy storm

Lightning vortex

Goblin thief

Swords og revealing light

Nobleman of crossout

MST

Brain control

Hammer shot

TRAPS

Energy drain

Spellbinding circle

Trap jammer

Chain burst

Magical arm shield

Shadow spell

Dust tornado

Jar of greed

Chthonian blast

Magic jammer

Plz give me sum strategies coz im entering a tournament next weekend

Answer 1

not bad (ii would rate it but i really dont see the point) :-) it looks like your going for high attack (beatdown so i'll give you a list that focuses on that. i would fix this one but its too many cards :-)

Monsters

x3 caius

x2 cyber dragon

x3 gene warped warwolf

x3 hydrogeddon

x3 Blue thunder t-45

x3 luster dragon

x1 marshmallon

x1 snipe hunter

Spells

x1 Monster reborn

x1 premature burial

x1 heavy strom

x1 mst

x2 or x3 enemy controller

x1 scapegoat

x1 brain control

x2 lightning vortex

x1 pot of avarice

Traps

x1 Mirror force (or sak)

x1 Torrential tribute

x1 magic cylinder

x2 sakuretsu armour

u need a few more cards i just cant think of anything else at the moment. just try to keep it  at 40.

hop i helped :-)

Also if you didn't know heavy storm is limited to one :-)

Answer 2

yoUR WAy 5/10

40 CarDS bETTer thAN fiTtY

Oxygeddon

Luster dragon

Gladiator beast andal

Dark blade

Chaos command magician

Sabersaurus

Zure knight of dark world

Gilford the legend

Blue eyes white dragon

Medusa worm

Gearfried the iron knight

Skilled dark magician

Mystic swordsman lvl4

Total defense shogun

The six samurai- zanji

SPELLS

Mystic wok

Red medicine

Dian keto the cure master

Poison of the old man

2xHeavy storm

Lightning vortex

Goblin thief

Swords of revealing light

MST

Brain control

Hammer shot

TRAPS

Energy drain

Spellbinding circle

Chain burst

Magical arm shield

Shadow spell

Dust tornado

Chthonian blast

Answer 3

not bad both you nead the trap:

mirior force

spell card:

posion arrow

Answer 4

I like it, but you are not bluffing are you? how can you get BlueEyes White Dragon in your deck!?it got attack of 3000!    remember you can only have 3 same cards in one deck, you can go to the yugioh official website to check about the forbidden cards too, I like your deck, I have my too, it's called E-Hero, as Judai said, Heros always win! what do you name your deck?