Can u rate my dark control deck?

Question

im tryin to make a dark control deck and was wonderin if this is tourny worth

monsters(22)

-giant orc

-dark elf

-patrician of darkness

-fire sorcerer

-zombyra the dark

-big eye

-dark scorpion - meanae the thron

-dark scorpion - chich the yellow

-dark blade

-sillva, warlord of dark world

-jowls of dark demise

-terrorking archfeind

-desrook archfiend

-vilepawn archfiend x2

-shadowknight arcfiend

-cyber jar

-summoned skull

-hane-hane x2

-mysterious guard

-relinquished

magics(9)

-pandemnium

-chaos end

-soul release

-giant trunade

-heavy storm

-mystical space typhoon

-brain control

-black illusion ritual

-premature burial

traps(12)

-bad reaction to simochi

-the eye of truth

-spellbinding circle

-shadow spell

-sakuretsu armor

-draining shield

-non agression area

-deck devastaion virus

-crush card virus

-eradicator epidemic virus

-return from the different dimension

-fake trap

total(43)

would this deck at least get me to regionals

Answer 1

no, it will get u nowhere torny wise cause cyber jar is banned....

the deck have too many negatice effect monster without enough cards to effectiviely cancel them, I suggest you to either focus on archfiend or run a deck full of negative effect monster (like giant orc, golblin attack force) with a lot of effect canceler(skill drain is best, ultimate attack order works fine for most, like the 2 I mentioned)  u can easily search with a search engine for lvl 4 or lower with high attacks, u should be able to get 20 of them at 2200 or higher ATK easy enough(all have bad effect, but u r gonna cancel them)  it's a fast deck, and dangrous... but I happen to love the face ur opponent have when summon a bunch of volitile monsters like that... they think u suiciding....

Answer 2

Some of your cards are banned so they won't allow it. Also, there is some cards in there that are really useless so take them out for a more powerful version. I saw that you had a totally mixed deck of archfiends and everything, try and get some of the new cards like dark grepher it will be more helpful.

Answer 3

some cards are banned but if your dueling for fun it will be a 9/10