Can u rate my poem piiiiiiiiz?

Question

my heart will gush wth a soft and suttle rush of all the loving words i say...

but hey dont you stray my love is like a ray..a drop of golden sunshine in your eyes.....

eachday... is like a difficult essay i cant do wth out you,,,but wth you my heart will gush!wth a soft and suttle rush of all the loving words i say..... SO RUSH ME! PUSH MI! WATCH ME FAAAALL!............in love wth you....

Answer 1

i really like it =) nice, but not corny haha

Answer 2

it's alright... but it seems like you just ran with it and didn't really put any thought into it, and sort of like you were just trying to rhyme without thinking about anything else.

Answer 3

    corny as h**l. but im one of those girls thats a sucker for cornyness...sadly.

    The ending is the best...push me and watch me fall in love with you. cute.

Answer 4

i like the end its sweet, but the grammar and structure kind of confused me

answer m question i want to know your opinion!! i like your work, but its not my style, so yeah, leave me an answer:

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