Can u tell me wut you think about my poems?

Question

My fault

Was it my fault, that you looked at me and noticed me?

Was it my fault, I fell for you, when all i was trying to do was change you?

Were my intenses wrong?

Is it my fault that now...we act as though we are strangers

Or was it your fault?

2.Perfection

Poetry

People think that my life is perfect, but its not

I'm shy

I can never say what i feel

Sure,im pretty, skiny, and nice,

But looks are deceiving

I have a good personality

And im open to love

But what am i missing?

It feels like everytime i blink, everytime i look away

My friends are gone

Off to another relationship

and when their heart gets broken, im here as always,

to confort them and tell them the truth,

When is it my turn?

To find love?

So why do people say im perfect?

Answer 1

they are pretty good keep wrtting poems

Answer 2

It seems to me that it a statement not a poem

Answer 3

i like them,please write some more.They sound so romantic

Answer 4

im really not good in poetry but oh, it touched my heart... cool...