Can words remove, as well as move, people?

Question

Stage Right

Slither in

Stomp out

Subtle, comes the storm

Disturbing the pieces

Desirous of notice only

Wrecking to be reckoned

Amongst the fog bound

Someone, please?

See me

Touch me

Hear me

Make me matter

Oh, you are matter

Tainted and opaque

Staining the pages

Brown water words

Yet angels sing

Cherubs rise above

Choirs rejoice

As right shows might

Stage cleared

Cleansed

Purified by honesty

They know they are

We know you aren't

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Answer 1

perfect.

Answer 2

If only it were that simple.

Love the poem!

Answer 3

I think I know what you're trying to get at with this, but I'd have to say: probably not.

Answer 4

Interesting poetic metaphor, excellently done.  

Answer 5

I forgot, the answer from the other day was, "Yes, 1 year and 1 day, all of 1980."

Answer 6

Well said. I am chuckling.  We do seem to know the culprit.

Edit: Oh, very vague were you!  Why don't you change the title to Gustav Coming!  lol

Answer 7

words unspoken move no one.

but the spoken incite.. as the written ignite.. and delight..

...are preserved... if deserved.

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ciao!

Answer 8

Inspiring!

Answer 9

Very covert and creative...at least I think so.  I might know who or what you are writing about, but since I can't be 100% certain, I'll just keep it to myself.  However, despite the uncertainty, this can be applied to just about anyone vying for negative attention...at least I think so.  An enjoyable read.

Answer 10

I almost missed this!  Interesting metaphors and very well written.