Love poem IV
The light of Venus, grace of the skies
Shines with brightness in her cloudless eyes
A heavenly joy dwells deep in her heart
An innocent love with no disguise
And o’er that flowing golden hair
So pure, it brings her a beauty rare
A queenly crown should sparkle bright
For she’s a goddess, a maiden fair
And surely Venus will stare amazed
With eyes aghast and eyebrows raised
At that summit of all earthly grace
That all the stars of sky have praised
1.The Venus in the first stanza is planet Venus
2.The Venus in the last stanza is the roman goddess.
ATTENTION:
Would this line be a better substitute for my last line?
Instead of:
That all the stars of sky have praised
to write:
That all the angels of heaven praised
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