Can you answer my question? is it good? your thoughts please?

Question

Shattered Hypocrisy

What is a heart if everyday it changes?

Why do we use it when everyone forgets it?

Why is the color red when sometimes it can be dark?

Sometimes the heart is big

When we forget that sometimes we forget how far.

At times the heart is small

But yet it slowly tries

So why do we use it?

When we all know it slowly dies.

Is it very simple to say that it's unique?

Or is it hard to say that

Particular organ of our body is used when someone speaks.

Answer 1

Hey.....it's not to bad...I like the concept of it, just keep working at it and keep revising it..

Peace and keep writing!  

Answer 2

very good.  . . you'd have to think about it for awhile before getting it's exact meaning

good job