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Can you be verwy verwy quiet?

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Did You Hear Me?

slip in and then out I went

like a Southern gent I meant

to stay a while but you

supine and divine so kind

staring blonde at the ceiling

look quite appealing

then a feeling stirred

blurred

my vision of indecision

and I thought better

I had let her rest some more

so tippy toe to the door

never more sure I returned

and turned and earned this right

to be here my Dear

sweet dew on your cheek

from words I speak

to you

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  1. Clotted hopes and

    whipped dreams..

    ..mm hmm.

    You are verwy deep... I envy that sleep.

    I can be verwy quiet .. quiet as a mouse.

    light on the wind ..as a damselfly will always be.


  2. This is verwy good.....

    .......and I will be verwy quiet......

    .....I'll tippy toe outa here so I don't ruin the mood.....

    Have a good day Hydro.!!!

  3. ditto Elaine, and yes, i heard you.

  4. I can't speak for there, but you certainly have earned the right to be here.

  5. I heard you loud and clear!

    Those Southern gents are always

    the silent types!

    Very hot!

    ma

  6. Quiet as a mouse I can be

    If you write more poetry like this for us to see.Shhhhhhh

  7. And the ladies line up and swoon for Hydro done penned a love tune!  Sarcasm aside, very nice, great mood with the words.

  8. I'd like another poem of the words that were spoken ...  Lovely poem.

  9. I can't top Elaine's answer! Kudos

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