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Can you check these sentence?

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I have a wallpaper site and users can also submit their wallpapers to the site and once I receive their submission, I review the wallpaper and if I see no problems about the wallpaper I publish it on the site.

After their submission, I show below sentence to the users. Can you check the sentence if it is correct grammatically and rationally? if you have a suggestion, can you also tell me? thanks!!!

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We have successfully put your wallpaper in queue on our server.

We will review your submission and publish your wallpaper on our website soon.

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  1.      'We have already put your wallpaper in THE queue FOR our server.'

         I think that's more correct.  See what others say.

    Good luck

    Mike B


  2. They are grammatically correct, but seem unnecessarily wordy

    "Thank you. Your submission will be reviewed prior to posting."

  3. sounds fine to me, easily understood, could probably say 'Thankyou' at the end...

  4. The sentence is grammatically correct so no worries.  

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