Can you comment on my latest poem? (it's not finished though)?

Question

I hear the soft whisper of breeze

As it comes in may

And I see the graceful leaves

How they dance all day!

Far away in the misty dunes

I hear the voice of sea

And as my ears fill with its tune

Nature’s spell takes me

All I can see in the bluish mist

Is the outline of a horse

And I say ‘it’s not a beast’

As it comes with graceful force

Its mane sparkles in the night

While its tail dances around

Its silvery body emits light

As it hovers on the ground

Thank you

Answer 1

That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have such an evocative talent. Thank you!

Answer 2

wow you have the gift of a true poet

the ending better be as good as the beggining lol

it seems like you really like nature, the sounds the smells the sights

Answer 3

very good! Bravo! Most stuff like that is hard to come up with! I love writing poetry in my spare time!