Can you correct this English text ?

Question

Can you, please, correct some mistakes I made?

This is the text:

Right here, just a step away from Vinci, the home-birth of the famous Leonardo da Vinci: Renaissance land, in the fascinating Tuscan landscape, Farmhouse Casa Italia gives you welcome to a quiet and relaxing holiday rich in art and culture.

Farmhouse Casa Italia, situated in a silver plated hill of secular olive trees and vineyards of Chianti DOC offers an unforgettable stay with amazing panoramic view, romantic and relaxing walking through nature, biological products, great and warm hospitality.

The property has got 12 apartments furnished as the typical country tuscan style, that brings you back in past times but at the same time they have all modern facilities included.

Two beautiful swimming pool makes you wanna dive into the sky.

Our guests can enjoy different kind of interesting itineraries in the neighbours and the possibility to enjoy our shared tennis playground and ping-pong table.

For well-being lovers, we also have special thermal centres with all beauty and health treatments included.

thanks for your help

Answer 1

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Error: Farmhouse Casa Italia gives you welcome to a quiet and relaxing holiday rich........

Correct Form: Farmhouse Casa Italia gives welcomes you to a quiet and relaxing holiday rich........

2.

Error:  romantic and relaxing walking through nature, biological products, great and warm hospitality.

Correct Form:  romantic and relaxing walk through nature, biological products, great and warm hospitality.

3.

Error: Two beautiful swimming pool makes you wanna dive into the sky. Our guests can enjoy different kind of interesting itineraries in the neighbours and the possibility to enjoy our shared tennis playground and ping-pong table.

Correct form: Two beautiful swimming pools will make you dive into the sky. Our guests can enjoy different kind of interesting itineraries in the neighborhood and it's possible they could enjoy our shared tennis playground and ping-pong table.  

Answer 2

Can you send me the Italian text or post it in additional details please.

It isn't really possible to correct this completely, although I could make a start.

I think it needs re-translation in some places.

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In the meanwhile:

secular - should be "centuries-old"

silver-plated - that doesn't really work here, I fear

biological - should be "organic"

"furnished in the typical Tuscan country style that takes you back to past times"

The paragraph which starts "Two ..." needs re-translation.

"For lovers of health and well-being, we also have special thermal spas ..."

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Right in the heart of the bewitching Tuscan landscape, Land of the Renaissance, just a stone’s throw from Vinci, birthplace of Leonardo, the farmhouse Casa Italia welcomes you to a quiet and relaxing holiday rich in art and culture.

Casa Italia, situated among hills bejewelled with centuries’-old olive trees [oppure, ancient olive trees] and vineyards of Chianti DOC offers you an unforgettable stay with enchanting panoramic views, relaxing walks, organic products and warm hospitality.

The property boasts 12 apartments furnished in the typical Tuscan country style, which take you back to past times while at the same time offering the convenience of modern facilities.

Two beautiful swimming pools overlooking the valley below seem to invite you to take a dive in the sky.

Footways and cycling routes among the olive trees and vineyards around the hill lead to the tennis court and the five-a-side football pitch.

For lovers of health and well-being, we also have a spa and health centre.

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Your translator seems to have worked from a different version of the last paragraphs.

Answer 3

Right here, just a step away from Vinci, is the home of the famous Leonardo da Vinci; a Renaissance land, in the fascinating Tuscan landscape, Farmhouse Casa Italia welcomes you to a quiet and relaxing holiday rich in art and culture.

Farmhouse Casa Italia, situated in a silver plated hill of secular olive trees and vineyards of Chianti DOC offers an unforgettable stay with amazing panoramic view, romantic and relaxing walks through nature, biological products and even a Great hospitality.

The property has got 12 apartments furnished in the typical country tuscan style. It brings you back to the olden times without excluding all the modern facilities.

Two beautiful swimming pools that will make you want to dive into the sky !

Our guests can enjoy different kinds of interesting itineraries with the neighbours and even have the possibility to enjoy our shared tennis playground and ping-pong table.

For well-being lovers, we also have special thermal centres with all beauty and health treatments included

Answer 4

the home-birth = birth place

gives you welcome = welcomes you

great and warm hospitality= warm and friendly

you back in = you back to

hope this helps all the best