Can you correct this text, thank?

Question

As for manipulation by human cloning, contrary to popular belief, it is also long overdue. Indeed, first in plants, cloning results in the plant cuttings: in taking a rod and the replanting creates a new plant, which have exactly the same genetic inheritance, it is a clone.

Dolly,a female sheep, was the first mammal to be cloned from an adult somatic cell, using the process of nuclear transfer.

The technique of cloning provides a solution for the survival of endangered species. So in January 2001, on a farm in Iowa was born wild ox. Noah is the first clone obtained from the cells of an animal in danger of extinction. It will still required 700 eggs from cow to arrive at the result.

But is striving to repopulate the species almost extinct from a very low genetic diversity? Will extend the feat in recreating species disappeared completely as the Tasmanian tiger that some would like to see revived?

If you don't understand a sentence,say it

Answer 1

It strikes me as poor plagarism, as if you took sentences almost word for word from several different sources and tried to put them together to form a report.

In my homeschool, that would be enough to get you grounded and having to not only rewrite it, but you would have to do another report or two or three on top of it to ensure it never happened again.

In our co-op that would garner a written warning sent to your parents, an F for the assignment and if lucky, an alternate assignment.

In the umbrella schools we have been a part of, that would be an F with a threat of suspension.

You need to start over and use your own words, citing your sources properly.

Answer 2

Oh my!! Where to begin. This is some of the worse writing I have seen. The sentences are all put together wrong.

I will be the first to say it- I don't understand you.

HAHA!! I suggest you go and rewrite this.

Answer 3

Sadly, if you were in a regular school the help you seek would be boundless.  Good luck.

Answer 4

A female sheep = a ewe.

Otherwise, like I said in your other post, one should be content to stand on one's own abilities, whether for good or bad. So, no, I won't simply do it for you.

However I will suggest you go back to the drawing board where your syntax, structure, word order, choice of words are all concerned, for instance: 'If you don't understand a sentence, say it' would make heaps more sense written as 'If you don't understand something, let me know'.

In its present form, it seems like you have relied upon one of the many online translators to compose the text - not a good idea as invariably such translators are incapable of accounting for context etc and only ever seem to provide gobble-de-g**k* in the place of the promised translation.

As it is written now, I'd say that, whilst the text manages to convey the gist of what you're trying to say, it really is *only* the gist. It still needs considerable re-working in order to make it read-able.

(*No, this isn't a typo - for some reason, the automatic censor replaced g-o-o-k with **** (!!!) I have no idea why).