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"BEIJING (AFP) - The little girl who starred at the Olympic opening ceremony was miming and only put on stage because the real singer was not considered attractive enough, the show's musical director has revealed."

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  1. The musical director for the Olympic opening ceremony revealed the little girl who starred in the show was miming.  She was put on stage only because the real singer was not considered attractive enough.

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    The musical director for the Olympic opening ceremony revealed the little girl who starred in the show mimed her performance.  She appeared in the production only because officials deemed the real singer not attractive enough.


  2. The musical director for the Olympic Opening ceremonies has revealed that the little girl that starred on the stage was actually miming the words as a stand in for the real singer who wasn't allowed to perform because she wasn't considered attractive enough to be on stage.

  3. The shows musical director has revealed that the little girls in question was miming, and had only been put on stage because the real singer was not considered attractive enough.

  4. A musical director for the opening show at this years Olympic ceremony has revealed that the supposed singer was a stand-in, miming her way through the performance simply because the real singer was deemed not attractive enough to be on stage.

  5. i don't think there's a grammatical error here.

  6. According to the show's musical director, the little girl that was put on stage was miming, and had only been used because the actual singer was not considered attractive enough.

    Hope this helps!

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