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Question

Teenagers discover that adolescent is one of the most difficult times which they go through, for they have to seek independence from their parents, deal under great pressure from friends, and decide the path they must follow in order to succeed in their lives. Once people go through adolescence, they realize that it has made them stronger people both mentally and physically, and they feel they are now ready to take on the world.

Answer 1

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eenagers discover that adolescent is one of the most difficult times which they go through, for they have to seek independence from their parents, deal under great pressure from friends, and decide the path they must follow in order to succeed in their lives...................................... people go through adolescence, they realize that it has made them stronger people both mentally and physically, and they feel they are now ready to take on the world.

Answer 2

Teenagers discover that adolescence is one of the most difficult times which they go through. It is a time when they have to seek independence from their parents. [ here you would give an example or 2 of seeking independence maybe from your own or a friend's experience or from some book or TV show] It is also a time when there is under great pressure from friends. [again give examples], and the time decide the path they must follow in order to succeed in their lives. Once people go through adolescence, they realize that it has made them stronger people both mentally and physically, [possible examples of how they show that strength].   After completing adolescence they feel they are now ready to take on the world.