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Philadelpha was more cold than NY ,It was had a lot of snow, every where was while color,this snowscapc was beautiful.we went to skiing place,we rented equipments It's important the choiceof equipments best suit to skiing.I was first time skiing, I didn'tknow how to do it , my frient just know little. came here before he told me about skiing. I staied to learn how do skiing, skinng place had some people teached,It was difficture to learnand interested .the teacher step-by-step teached ,I learned many hourse, I could know how did to control ski not t ranning .I fall down a lot of time ,but I didn't feet heard .I not scart ,I chimb uphill ,in the uphill skiing down I was very excited to know skiing. we went skiing all day . this was night time was back to hotel .every bady left here.Next day we continue skiing. this common sport I think is may you heathly ,If youworkto much and feet stress .you get a trip ,May be it dose helfyou

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Philadelphia was colder than NY.  There was a beautiful blanket of white snow.  My friend and I decided to go to a ski resort.  First we rented equipment.  It is important to get the right kind of equipment for my height and weight.  I did not know this because it was my first time skiing.  It was not my friend's first time skiing but she was still new at skiing.  We decided to take skiing lessons.  It was difficult to learn, but the teacher taught us step-by-step. I took lessons for many hours, until I learned how to control the skis. I fell down a lot, but it didn't hurt.  I was not scared. I was very excited All day I rode the lift uphill and then skied down the hill.  At night time we went back to the hotel.  The next day we continued skiing.  Skiing is a really great sport.  It will make you healthy.  If you are stressed out, go on a ski trip. It might just help you.