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Can you give me some thoughts about this poem? - On Some Rainy Days?

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Sometimes on some rainy days i

Like to stop and

Wonder why the sky is so

Blue, like the water in the

Sea. And i'd like to

Think why the grass is so

Green like the shoes

in my closet.

i like to ask myself why

The days pass so slowly when

Time passes so fast; And why

my feet grow closer to the

Ground everyday.

i like to think back into the

Times when i used to sit

On Mama's lap, and wiggle my

Toes, holding a story

Book in my hand and reading about Little

Red Riding Hood and the Big Bad Wolf.

And when the angry rain battered my

Window and the thunder

Clapped, and sounded

Louder than the slamming of

Papa's Door, Mama would tuck

me into bed quickly and

i would leave the open

Book beside my table to

Accompany me.

In the night, i would see the

Big Bad Wolf which consumed

Red. Then Papa's

Door would slam like the

Thunder and shadows would creep

Outside my room.

And i would hear nothing but the

Sound of rain patter against my

Window.

Then i would ask myself:

Why did i leave the book open?

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  1. it sounds nice but no offense but it sounds more of a short monolouge that a poem. i'm sorry.


  2. don't listen to all of them, i seriously think this is a good poem. My favourite part is : Then i would ask myself:

    Why did i leave the book open?. I really love that part, its just so hard to think of it, but yet, the answer is there. I find it profound.

    Good job, and dont worry bout the haters.

  3. I like it you should write a poem book and get it  published i recommend authorhouse.co.uk tele freephone 9am-5pm monday -friday 08001974150 ask for Elaine or Mr Ross Thomson or Sasha tell them i sent you

  4. I realy like it.. being a 'rain' fan myself.. i find it easy to absorb... the rainy atmosphere here in ur case showed me the clumsyness i am to experience later on in the poem..i like it when u pose and direct the question to urself, simply shows that there is no one else to answer ur questions, u struggle to find the answers urself..nice! in deed. well done!

  5. No offence but it's c**p. really c**p.

    Unless your father really did sexually abuse you in which case it's a materpiece. god bless your beautiful soul.

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