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Can you give me some tips to right this essay?!?

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Increasing role of technolgy in our daily lives?

I'd really appreciate any help!

Thanks in advance.

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  1. Just focus on the fact that technological advances have taken the express route over the last decade.  Innovations arrive almost on a daily basis.   The problem with this is that we just can't keep up.  It seems the minute we buy one new product, another pops up that's even more advanced and the one we bought has become obsolete.     At this point, we're all relying on technology.  We all have cell phones, i pods, Blackberries, computers...  As a result, more is expected of us.  We can't rely on excuses to avoid doing the work because it's just too easy to have access to information or communication.  Look at this site, for example.  Because of this, students are not taking the time to think for themselves (in may instances).  They're getting lazy and allowing others to think for them.  Because of the Internet, people aren't taking the time to do legwork to research.  The dangerous thing is that we tend to believe what we find on the Internet.  We assume it's correct.  Think of how dangerous that can be!  If I can post enough propaganda on the Internet, I can control so many people.  Scary, isn't it?


  2. Do you mean 'write' an essay on 'The Increasing Role of Technology in our Daily Lives"?

    Here are some points you could discuss:

    - Reliance on technology makes us lazy (i.e. No wonder we're fat!)

    - Reliance on technology renders us useless (i.e. We can't do anything without help nowadays)

    Well, actually, it all depends on whether you're trying to prove a point or analyse something.


  3. NANO TECHNOLOGY  

    I saw this show on dicovery channel a while ago that said certain auto makers are using nano technology to fix scratches and brush marks on cars....the nano chip is so smal that it attaches itself to a paint particle in the car paint and makes it spread out thus covering your ugly scratch...by just the press of a button in your car ....and i heard that scientists with todays technology are making the nano chip a size smaller every other day or something like that.....and scientists are supposively trying to make nano chip attach themselves onto cancer cell and killing them....I thaught that was kinda kool...I hope I helped good luck!!

  4. First of all, please know the difference between the "right" you use, and the "write" you should have used.

    For technology increasing in our world, Google "smart home", "smart house" and "smart car".  You'll get plenty ideas of how technology is increasing from cars using solar or new battery technologies to homes that can just about clean themselves, unlock doors, start cooking a meal while you're at work, etc.  And then there is 3-D TV coming in a few years, got help us.  (There is also the advanced HD hitting the airwaves now.)

    Sounds like a fun exercise.  Good luck!

  5. Ok, so the first step with any essay is to analyse the question.

    You need to look at the assumptions within the question. Although this question seems to be fairly basic.

    Once you have done that. Define the key terms. In your case - "technology" and "daily lives".

    Then, work out what your argument is going to be. Give about five major points to support your case and each of these points will be one of your paragraphs.

    Structure is crucial so that you don't become distracted.

    We got taught this structure at high school for each paragraph -

    S - statement

    E - explain the statement

    X - give examples to support your statement

    Y - Why is this the case? very similar to your statement.

    Hope this helps - best of luck!

  6. INCREASING!? are you sure that prompt wasn't DECREASING!? Technology plays way to big of role in our lives already!

  7. Learn to spell.

  8. my teacher taught me to s**y or pee, but pee is better:

    POINT - technology is increasing, blah blah

    EVIDENCE - hospitals use computers, whatever

    EXPLANATION - more technologies developed to help people, make life easier, cure cancer, whatever

    and then, write the PEE again 2 times, except use different "EE"s.

    so you get an essay that looks like

    P

    E

    E

    P

    E

    E

    P

    E

    E

    and then you take All the "P"'s and put them together, and change that a bit and that's your introduction, and then you change your intro a bit to make your conclusion, so you get

    Intro (All the P's

    P

    E

    E

    P

    E

    E

    P

    E

    E

    Ending

    bahahaha, have fun with your essay

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