Can you help me edit my poem

Question

Opinions are welcomed too. I know its not the best

I couldn't get you out of my mind

but I couldn't tell you either

Scared to death

It would ruin everything

it was so hard for me

to keep my true feelings a secret

You are everything I want and ever needed

The only one who understand

And knew the true me.

Couldn’t keep how I felt for you in

One day it all just slipped

My luck we shared the same thought

You are the only one who can.

Bring back the fire that died in my eyes

The only one able to dry my tears and stifling cries

The one who can heal the pain the I feel

Ease my fears and push away my tears

A voice the magically eases all my pain

Lets me know I’m never alone

Keeps me holding on

While the rest of my world shatters into pieces

Able to bring a smile to my face, with his laugh

Always there when I need him, good or bad

Someone who I can open up to

The only one who knows the real me.

Answer 1

love like mist

i can lose my heart anytime

make me crazy when i see u cry

make me happy when i see u smile

life is nothing without u i die

baby baby i love u baby

nothing fair in life just seeing u smile

love u baby i can die

The end

how is it good bad sucks

plzz tell me or e-mail me

thinks

Answer 2

well...

are you 9?

it sounds elementary level..

jkkk!

it's amazing :D :D :D

it'd make an AWESOME song

good lucks

CHEERS TO ME

jk