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Can you help me find a title for my poem? :)?

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Take my life

Turn it into dreams

Slow motion takes over me

I see things not meant to be seen

These feelings are killing me

These emotions take advantage

I hate it. I hate them

They make life my disadvantage

I huddle in this dark corner

of my mind. It tries to retrace

but all i think of is to go away

and stick in my breaking back brace

Save my mind. Save my sanity

Kill off my thirst for empathy

Burn it down and see right through

this looking glass for sympathy

My legs are stiff and my back wont bend

My head becomes dizzy and frail

Introversion is my horrible illness

that is used to no avail

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  1. "Can you feel my pain?"


  2. Light me

    Do you feel me.

    Pain.

    Agony

    no avail (last words)  i like this best.

    Very nice poem, I FELT ur pain in a sense. and that is what a poem should be.

  3. "Another Time"

  4. "Sitting in the Back of My Mind"

  5. "Irresistible Pains".

  6. No Avail

  7. Killing the dark corner's of my mind.

  8. Mental Anguish

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