Can you help me fix my monarch deck?

Question

Monsters:

Granmarg the rock monarch

spirit reaper

b.e.s. tetran

mobius the frost monarchx2

d.d. assailant

Goblin attack force

goblin elite attack force

spear dragonx3

d.d. warrior lady

d.d. warrior

piranha army

thestalos the firestorm monarch

treeborn frog

spells:

mystical space typhoon

soul exchangex3

monster reborn

scapegoat

tribute to the doomed

heavy storm

enemy controller

card trader

lightning vortex

brain control

traps:

straight flush

waboku

trap hole

torrential tribute

spell sheild type-8

windstorm of etaqua

dimension wall

magic cylinder

sakuretsu armor

bottomless trap hole

Answer 1

thats not monarch

no grammarg neeeds l.a.d.d

Answer 2

Here, Monarchs can be brilliant, and yours i well on the way to being so. you just have some thing that you really need to get rid of. Here, Make your deck exactly like this.

Monsters - 19

1x Raiza the Storm Monarch

1x Mobius the Frost Monarch

2x Caius the Shadow Monarch

3x Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch

1x Jinzo

2x Cyber Dragon

1x Treeborn Frog

2x Gravekeeper's Spy

2x Deikotchi the Battlechanted Locomotive

1x Marshmallon

1x Spirit Reaper

1x Sangan

1x Card Trooper

Spells - 14

3x Soul Exchange

1x Scapegoat

1x Brain Control

2x Lightning Vortex

1x Pot of Avarice

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

1x Heavy Storm

1x Premature Burial

1x Monster Reborn

2x Foolish Burial (For Treeborn)

Traps - 7

1x Mirror Force

1x Torrential Tribute

3x Compulsory Evacuation Device

2x Bottomless Trap Hole

This is a great Monarch deck. You don't really see normal monarch decks around anymore. They are mostly Macro and Perfect Circle. It's good to see someone that hasn't jumped ont othe band wagon. Anyway, if you are able to make this deck then you should really do so.