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Can you help me grammer check?

by Guest59287  |  earlier

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Mothers around the world

Moms around the world each have their own unique form of parenting skills that differs between cultures, but they all share the unconditional love that bonds them to their children. Even though, my mother, grandmother, and aunt have different parenting skills that they share with children and family. First of all, I love my mother for the guidance, love, respect, and compassion she always had for me, also for the proper things she always taught me. My mother’s amazing daily sacrifices has never been forgotten she would do anything in the world for me; she didn’t care how she felt because as long as she knew she was happy, she was fine. I appreciated her a lot when she would say “Even if I am poor, even if I don’t have what others have, I have fine young men and women that I am raising at home to be good people in our society. Moreover, my aunt is very strict with her parenting skills, it differs because on how she raised her son.

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  1. Okay. It's grammar, not "grammer." Spell check first, then check for grammatical issues.

    . . . skills that differ (not differs)

    No comma after "Even though,"

    Comma is optional but not preferred between "grandmother, and aunt . . ."

    ". . . daily sacrifices have never . . . " (not "has never")

    A period after forgotten. Capital "She would do . . ."

    ". . . I have a fine young man . . ." (not "I have a fine young men")

    . . . and women? She has daughters too? In that case, it should be something like "I have a fine young man and two girls . . ."

    Moreover is not appropriate because you are not really adding to the last sentence. Your aunt is a different subject. A more appropriate way to say it is "In contrast, my aunt is very strict . . ."

    A period after skills. "They (the skills) differ . . . " (no "s" after "differ")

    "They differ in how she raises her son." (Not "on how")

    "Like ever" is an incomplete sentence and should be deleted.


  2. sure, grammar check what

  3. k this is how you spell it: grammar  :)

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