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Can you help me improve it? *it's for a yearbook xP

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Service is the best way to show gratitude towards God's goodness as the persons who exemplify it live in selflessness and sincerity

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  1. Goodness does not work with the rest of the high-level vocabulary. Try a thesaurus, but goodness just doesn't work for me.

    Try virtue.


  2. Put a comma after goodness.
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