Can you help me make this sound good?

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How did the band get together? It all started in 2006 where I (Sara) use to sing in a club called the Innisfail singing group and Kanramajit use to play the drum in another.

What are some of the tour that the band have coming up? Well we are going to tours around the word.

What are some of the awards that the band has won? We won some awards in 2008 and there where best mix CD, best soft rock and more.

Where did the band go on there tour? Well we went to Los Angeles, New York, London, Canada and more.

Do you have any negative or positive thing about how you play with? No Not rally

Do you have any negative or positive thing about where you had played when you where touring? Yes I well say we do have some negative things to say about the place we played when we where touring we did not have many songs to play at the performance and we did not get many people at the performance. And the positive thing about the band is that we played good at ever place we vested.

What are some of the albums that you have for you band? We have 4 albums that are out in the world and they are Look at me, Think for your self, English man and my band 2.5.

Do you think you shod have more band members in your band? Yes we shod have more band members so we came make the band sound good.

What was some of the songs you play on your tours? Well the band play some song from there new album that just came out just before they when on the tours. Some of the song was Big girls don’t cry, shut up and drive, the end, don’t stop the music and more.

How do you came up with you song? Well we do not came up with are song we have some one make the songs for us.

If some one ask you to be in there well you and why? Well if it was a good band then yes some that I get to play good song and do more tour that will is fun.

How was it getting to tour with my chemical romance? It was good more people came to the show then when we tour just in Australia.

Answer 1

A lot of the questions don't make any sense, and your answers were a bit rambling and confusing (I assume English is not your first language?), but hopefully this will help.

Fill in the "blanks" where I've indicated info is needed, and read through it carefully to make sure my take on your answers is accurate.

Instead of repeating "The band" or "Your band" in the questions, state the band's name so people will remember it.  I still don't know what it's called, or if you're speaking for the band as a whole or just yourself.

Good luck.

HOW DID THE BAND GET TOGETHER?

It all started in 2006 when I was performing with the Innisfail singing group.  Kanramajit was playing drums in another band.  We got together, and here we are!

DO YOU HAVE ANY TOURS PLANNED?

We have a world tour in the works.  We’ll have more info as soon as the dates are set.

WHAT ARE SOME AWARDS YOUR BAND HAS WON?

Just this year we won Best Mix CD and Best Soft Rock CD [list the name of the award/granting entity].

WHERE HAS THE BAND TOURED?

So far we've played Los Angeles, New York, London, Canada, and Australia.

DO YOU HAVE ANY NEGATIVE OR POSITIVE THING ABOUT HOW YOU PLAY WITH?

I don’t know what you mean.  All creative expression is positive at its core.

DO YOU HAVE ANY NEGATIVE OR POSITIVE THOUGHTS ABOUT YOUR PREVIOUS GIGS?

We didn’t have great audience turnout at a few of our shows, and we would have liked some more stage time, but we rocked every venue we played and got an overwhelmingly positive response from the people who did come to see us.

HOW MANY ALBUMS HAVE YOU RELEASED?

We’ve cut four albums so far: Look at Me, Think for Yourself, English Man, and My Band 2.5.

DO YOU PLAN ON ADDING BAND MEMBERS?

If we find the right fit, we’re open to experimenting with new voices and instrumentation.

WHAT ARE SOME OF THE SONGS YOU PERFORM ON TOUR?

We’ve been featuring songs from our latest album like Big Girls Don’t Cry, Shut Up and Drive, The End, and Don’t Stop the Music.

HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH YOUR SONGS?

We have a very talented writer and composer who works with us to help create our unique sound.

IF SOME ONE ASKED YOU TO BE IN THEIR BAND, WOULD YOU AND WHY?

I’m always open to new experiences, and the chance to play good songs and tour would be hard to pass up.

WHAT WAS IT LIKE GETTING TO TOUR WITH MY CHEMICAL ROMANCE?

It was amazing. It brought our music to a much wider audience, and touring Australia was an incredible opportunity.