Can you help me pleae?

Question

I need you help with the introduction paragraph of milton friedman and john mackey. The first paragraph has to catch the reader's eyes so i need you help to make it best

Answer 1

Here is a brief opening paragraph:

"Not many students know about Nobel Prize winner, Milton Friedman.  But, I'll let you know how this academic economist became a world reknown thinker, and contributor to the theory known as "Supply-side Economics".  He served as an advisor for Barry Goldwater, and later Richard Nixon.  

Who could have guessed that this 4th child of Austria-Hungary immigrants, born in 1912 in Brooklyn, New York,  would have achieved so much before he died in 2006 at the age of 94."

For John Mackey, there are too many people this name matches with, none in economics that I find.  One is football player, the other is a CEO of Whole Foods Inc.