Can you help me re-word this sentence?

Question

Shops will also attract shoppers who are most likely to travel by car. The CBD will attract holiday makers who once again will travel by car.

Thank you =)

Answer 1

The shops will attract shoppers and the CBD will attract holiday makers as a result of the many visitors, most of whom will travel by car.

Answer 2

Which sentence?  That's two sentences you have there :o)

Answer 3

Shops and the CBD both depend on car travelers for much of their business.