Can you help me with my deck?

Question

So basically, I'm trying to run a dark type deck. The samurai cards can go. Please make your suggestions gear towards a dark type deck.

Thank you all!

here goes:

2-sacs

1x belial-marquis of darkness

1-sacs

1x jinzo

3x dasher

1x darknight parshath

1x goldd wu-lord

2x grandmaster of the six samurai

1x total defense shogun

4 stars or less

2x mystic tomato

3x d.d. survivor

1x ducker-mobile cannon

2x six samurai-irou

1x mataza the zapper

1x chaos necromancer

2x diamond dude

1x six samurai-yaichi

1x snipe hunter

1x d.d. warrior lady

1x six samurai-zanji

spells

2x reinforcement of the army

1x trunade

1x monster reborn

1x MST

2x monster gate

2x fires of doomsday

1x NOC

1x lightning vortex

traps

2x A hero emerges

1x dark illusion

1x trap jammer

1x no entry!

1x return of the six samurai

--SchplatJR

Answer 1

I see where ur goin w/ ur deck, having special summoners as ur advantage, like goldd and dasher and having belial, which is a nice set up if ur using it right but can also backfire. i would take trunade out for heavy storm instantly, add 1 or 2 allure of darkness a DMOC would be good, but take out like 1 dasher  nd defense shogun because like the the guy above, Kenny, stated u don't want to have to much sacrificing monsters. a foolish burial would be nice for getting dasher to the graveyard quick to use his special summoning effect... o and a morphing jar would be nice. i would also revise ur spell nd traps w/ cards like trap dustshoot, phoenix wing wind blast,  nd mirror force. but thats all i can think of for now.

Answer 2

its okay i guess but u dont really need that many sac monsters

just keep around 4-6 7 maybe

Answer 3

You can't really call this a dark deck.  Yes it has alot of dark monsters, but having dark monsters doesn't really make it a dark deck.  For instance, you have Samurais in this deck.  That makes no sense at all.  They belong in a Samurai deck and nothing else.  You have Dark World monsters in here too.  The same rules apply.  I'll show you what an actual dark deck is supposed to look like.  Keep in mind that you will need alot of money to make the deck I have as most of the cards can be pretty expensive.  I'm posting it just to give you an idea of what it should look like then maybe you can build around it.

Dark Deck

Main Deck (44)

Monsters (22)

2 Darklord Zerato

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

1 Destiny Hero – Plasma

2 Dark Nephthys

1 Jinzo

1 Van’Dalgyon the Dark Dragon Lord

1 Destiny Hero – Dasher

1 Elemental Hero Stratos

1 Strike Ninja

1 Dark Grepher

2 Armageddon Knight

2 Gravekeeper’s Spy

1 Destiny Hero – Fear Monger

2 Cyber Valley

1 Destiny Hero – Disk Commander

1 Sangan

1 Spirit Reaper

Spells (13)

2 Allure of Darkness

3 Trade-In

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

1 Heavy Storm

1 D.D.R. – Different Dimension Reincarnation

2 Fires of Doomsday

1 Scapegoat

Traps (9)

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Solemn Judgment

2 Phoenix Wing Wind Blast

2 Limit Reverse

1 Return from the Different Dimension